Thesis Writing #1
My thesis will not focus on providing easy solutions to social issues, but will instead use design to illuminate and draw attention to them, in a voice that is appropriate for the medium being utilized and the audience that is affected. My thesis will not be a mere aesthetic exercise. Instead, it will be an attempt to create design that engages public, social and urban issues. My thesis will not be limited to a single format, such as posters or a website, but will instead be multi-modal and exist across different media platforms, from analog to digital, 2D to 3D, and from pixels to paint. My thesis will not be created in a vacuum, informed only by my personal opinion, academic background or viewpoint, instead it will be collaborative and cooperative, with feedback from others in the discipline of social design directly informing my design direction and project development.
My thesis focus will not be a single take on this important subject, but will instead be framed as a series of investigations or probes which form the basis for my inquiry. My thesis will not be confined to an academic setting, but will utilize site-specific installations to engage the audiences affected by the public, social and urban issues that I am exploring. My thesis will not live only in a design context, but will be put into the public sphere to engage the audience affected by the issues that are being illuminated. My thesis will not be transitory and end with my final installation, but will instead be collected into a cumulative publication that relates the different projects into one overall body of work and investigation.
My thesis will not be an empty promise of easy solutions to difficult problems, wrapped up in a beautiful but ultimately empty design. Instead, it will cast a harsh light and create discourse around a difficult subject area that deserves more attention beyond the affected population.
The idea of “casting a harsh light” on social problems came through in several of your projects last year, from your Buy*Product t-shirt to your Baltimore slogans installation to your Fuck Content posters. Developing that authentic voice is a good challenge.
Looking at your writing in terms of “active/passive voice,” I see that you tend to write in the passive, even though your ideas are about action. Phrases such as “not be limited to,” “not be created in,” “be framed as,” and “be collected into” are all passive constructions, whereas “will cast a harsh light and create discourse…” is an active construction. (Again, passive voice is not an error, just a habitual mode of writing to be aware of.)
Ellen Lupton
October 2, 2008 at 12:06 pm
Your voice may be occasionally passive but the content is
clear and compelling.
Jennifer Cole Phillips
October 13, 2008 at 12:56 am